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图书名称：《写出托福好文章》

【作　者】范波编著

【页 数】 242

【出版社】 中国原子能出版传媒有限公司 , 2021.03

【ISBN号】978-7-5221-1308-1

【价 格】68.00

【分 类】TOEFL-写作-自学参考资料

【参考文献】 范波编著. 写出托福好文章. 中国原子能出版传媒有限公司, 2021.03.

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《写出托福好文章》内容提要：

本书阐明了写作提升的两条必备原则：构思、词汇和语法永远不分家；写作提升必须有清楚的操作指导，比如如何建立模板再打破模板，如何在构思、词汇和语法方面一步一步提升。本书包括独立写作和综合写作两大版块。其中，独立写作分为两部分，第一部分结合真题讲述如何确立结构和句式，再打破固定句式由中级向高级晋升，包括13个话题素材和120篇例文。第二部分包括举例切入点、四种常见论证方法以及写作高频词汇和句式等。综合写作结构和句式同样分为初、中、高三个级别并且配有例文参考。书后配套汉译英和写作练习题及相应答案。扫描封三勒口二维码，即可获取免费写作视频课。

《写出托福好文章》内容试读

独立写作结构和相应句式

第一章独立写作结构和相应句式

托福独立写作要求考生在30分钟之内写出一篇300词以上的文章，并且做到主题突出、条理清晰，这就必须要有一个合理的结构。根据北美的“五段式”结构，

一般第一段先交代背景引出话题，再提出双方观点，然后表明自己立场；第二至第

四段为三个论证段，一般要有连接词连接，且每段第一句话一般是主题句对该段进行高度概括，后面是围绕主题句的展开，其中第三个论证段有时会写成反驳段，即先讲反方观点再对其进行反驳；第五段为总结段，包括重申观点、总结升华，有时候会有展望号召。

以下是文章的结构图和相应句式。在接下来的章节中，不但有对应结构图和固定句式的中级例文，还会讲述如何打破固定句式由中级上升为高级，并且配有高级例文。

独立写作结构

背景

双方观点

表明立场

主题句1

主题句2

主题句3

阐述并论证

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相应句式

背景：

立

For many years/Recently,there has been a growing trend of.../general concern over.../widespread phenomenon that.../public discussion about...吸心场立，和账底来出关国双方观点：

As opposed to the argument that...,some people hold the view that...表明立场：

From my perspective/For my part,I approve of the former/latter opinion.

A careful examination/Even a moment's reflection will show the superiority of theformer/latter opinion.

来进友心物雅别徐的章文重可夏

主题句1之前常用连接词和句式：

Firstly/In the first place/First of all/For starters/To begin with/The most important reason formy viewpoint is that...

主题句2之前常用连接词和句式：

Besides/Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally/In addition/What's more/In the second place/

The second point is that...

主题句3之前常用连接词和句式：

Finally/Lastly/Last but not the least

如果第三个论证段为反驳段，开头的连接词和句式有：

Admittedly/Granted/There is no denying the fact that..重申观点及总结升华：

行托圆

From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that..

Taking all these factors into account/consideration,we may finally come to the conclusionthat..

或者，A thorough analysis reveals the advantages of.展望号召：

Only when...can we/they...

或者，Only in this way can we/they.或者，Only by doing...can we/hey…

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独立写作13个话题素材及例文

第二章

独立写作13个话题素材及例文

如何建立模板再打破模板从中级跃升为高级

Education

⊙话题素材

overworked by compulsory tasks and confined in the house强制性任务使他们筋疲力尽，只能待在家里

The fault is not with our children,but with the narrowness of the flowerbed in which weexpect them to germinate.错误不在于我们的孩子，而是我们期待他们生根发芽的花床过于狭窄。

stand on the stance of children站在孩子的立场上

Parents should let their children develop their problem-solving ability and a positive attitudeso that they will grow strong and reach high like the birds flying freely in their own sky.该让孩子提高解决问题的能力和培养积极的态度，以便他们能茁壮成长、志存高远，像鸟儿一样在自己的天空中自由飞翔。take a long perspective目光长远look at the big picture着眼大局

Whether books are a treasure house of wisdom or collection of second hand experiencedepends on how well you can put knowledge into practice..书籍是智慧的宝库，还是二手经验的累积，取决于你如何学以致用。inner quality内在素质overall quality综合素质

develop in an all--round way全面发展

give full play to their imagination and intelligence充分发挥他们的想象力和智慧exert their utmost尽他们最大努力spare no pains in doing sth..不遗余力做某事

have your brains racked in doing sth.绞尽脑汁做某事burn the midnight oil点灯熬夜

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cultivate the mind and nurture the soul陶冶情操、滋润心灵unwind and restore the dulled senses放松并恢复活力

keep a balance between tension and relaxation劳逸结合非升是立physical and mental health身心健康a positive outlook on life积极的人生观

analyze hypotheses and demonstrate evidence分析假设，展示证据

raise doubts about the conventional theories or notions质疑传统理论或观念林律温话国lay a solid foundation打下坚实的基础

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fiercely competitive job market竞争激烈的就业市场

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minute labor division精细的劳动分工

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fall into chronic job-hopping and anxiety陷入长期跳槽和焦虑中

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get/gain/find a secure foothold取得立足之地

Swarming into the first-tier cities,fresh graduates find their lofty ideals thwarted in the fiercelycompetitive job market and gaining a secure foothold has become their primary concer.毕业生涌入一线城市，在竞争激烈的就业市场上发现自己的远大理想受挫，取得立足之地成为他们关注的首要问题。

School Education

大得出

⊙例文

中级

University should invest more financially in supporting social activities instead ofimproving the food for students.Do you agree or disagree?

Recently,there has been a general discussion about the importance of social activities foruniversity students.As opposed to the argument that more university funding should goto social activities,some people hold the view that university should give priority to foodquality.Even a moment's reflection will show the superiority of the former opinion

一个适用于所有题目的模板起初是必须的，目的是规范思路、熟练掌握复杂句式、提高写作速度。这一段是典型的模板句，但是满分文章应该有更新颖、更紧密联系

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实际的开头，比如：

You may not remember the delicious Kung Pao Chicken or Muxu Pork you had atuniversity,but the fantastic social activities will definitely leave a deep impression.I believemore university fundings should go to these activities.And my reasons are listed as follows.

For one thing,social activities help students improve their interpersonal skills.When theycommunicate and collaborate with different people,they will get familiar with differentpersonalities and learn how to get on well with them.In this course,they will realize theimportance of mutual understanding and sharpen their social skills.

通过现在分词和定语从句可以把这一段的后两句话合成一句话：心

Communicating and collaborating with different people,they will get familiar with differentpersonalities and learn how to get on well with them,in which course they will realize theimportance of mutual understanding and sharpen their social skills.

The second point is that these activities can help students understand and grasp the knowledgein textbooks better.Putting knowledge into practice is a good way to consolidate the knowledge.

Organizing volunteering activities,for example,will help us make the best of the managementskills in textbooks and know how to improve efficiency in reality.Without practice,theknowledge can only be second hand experience which cannot serve the practical purpose.第一句中的“understand”和“grasp”可以换成更形象的词，比如“absorb'”和“digest”。“.is a good way to consolidate the knowledge.”可以改为：“.is key toknowledge consolidation."

Finally,students will get motivated to study harder when they encounter problems in thesocial activities and want to solve them.They will have heated discussion and eventuallythey may find the knowledge in textbooks is the most efficient.So they will decide to readit again to find what they missed before.I have some friends who were biased against theknowledge in textbooks and thought it's not very practical.But only when they used it tosolve the real problems did they find what a treasure house of wisdom the textbooks are.So,they decided to study harder.

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结合上下文，这句话“I have some friends who were biased against the knowledge intextbooks and thought it's not very practical,.”时态应该是过去完成时。

From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that socialactivities are more important than food quality.Only when universities put these activitiesat first can they get students well-equipped for career development and help them studyharder and more efficiently.模板句可以改为：

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Overall,social activities can get students well-equipped for career development andhelp them study harder and more efficiently.Therefore,considering their advantages,priority should be given to these activities,and much financial support for food seems lessimperative as long as the food doesn't do harm to health,整篇文章的个别用词和句式还可以进一步提升。

♪高级

1.University should invest more financially to support social activities instead ofimproving the food for students.Do you agree or disagree?

You may not remember the delicious Kung Pao Chicken or Muxu Pork you had atuniversity,but the fantastic social activities will definitely leave a deep impression.I believemore university fundings should go to these activities.And my reasons are listed as follows.

For one thing,social activities help students improve their interpersonal skills.Communicatingand collaborating with different people,they will get familiar with different personalities andlearn how to get on well with them,in which course they will realize the importance of mutualunderstanding and sharpen their social skills.w

The second point is that social practice can help students absorb and digest the knowledge intextbooks better.Integrating theory with practice is key to knowledge consolidation.Organizingvolunteering activities,for example,will help us make the best of the management skills in

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